To heaven &.. [I]

PART ~ I ~

It was a long walk I have to admit until we finally reached the gates of heaven, that’s what the angel who was accompanying me said. She opened the gate, let me in and was gone just like that.. I didn’t even get a chance to ask her name.

I was now alone, walking towards a larger door at the end of a long staircase moving upwards. I would have to say I’ve never seen so many clouds around me, I was literally walking on cloud 9. As I pushed opened the large door, I saw two smaller doors named Past and Future. I pushed opened the door of the future and saw a girl standing at the end of the room facing her back towards me..she was wearing what looked like a white frock.

“Excuse Me, Are you my future?” I asked

She didn’t seem to want to answer and after a long pause she said

“Only if you want me to be” slowly turning her face towards me. It was hazy and I couldn’t recognize the face, I walked closer and finally saw her. It was the same angel who accompanied me to Heaven, she looked oddly similar to someone I knew, like as if we have met before, that long straight hair, that familiar smile.

Oh wait! You are..

But I don’t understand..we’re married? When..how…and I’m dead? Why? I’ve waited all my life for this day..

For the continuation.. you will find it [II] HERE

20 Replies to “To heaven &.. [I]”

  1. Hmm 😒..
    An interesting little story..
    Almost like a dream..

    Really good 😊.. now I can’t wait to find out who was that girl you kind recognized

    1. I so missed writing these little stories, I used to write them quite often earlier 🙂

      1. You should start again…
        I like them…
        You do have a great imagination

  2. It was so full of suspense, I cannot wait for the next part! Good job!

    1. yes, its still in the mind..but the plot is ready, word formation is left. You will least expect, what’s coming…

  3. Lovely story… your wife will feel so special! She is tbe angle, right?

    1. ..to be wife hopefully 😉 hahahaha 😉 I really hope writing these stories, at least one of them comes true! Come’on Shivangi, we’ve been connected so long..and you don’t know that I’m still single (baffling I know) 😉

      1. I am sorry, I just got confused. Of course I know you are unmarried, living somewhere around Goa…I am sure you will meet your angel soon😀😀😀.

        1. Did the story get you confused..if so, I’m glad it did, that means you were totally into the story 🙂 No sorry’s & thank you’s and yes I live IN Goa 🙂

          1. Yippee…looking forward to reading more from you😀👍

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  6. Wow what an awesome story Savio and the stairway to heaven from the clouds is so beautifully portrayed.👌👌👌👌👌

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